Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In campus violence cases in Beijing during the last five years, 14 percent of the offenders not only beat others, but also insulted(侮辱）them. They slapped(打耳光）others, made them kneel down, and in some cases took off other people’s clothes.

Violence at schools has been widely reported in media in recent years 一 the violence among teenagers has drawn public and government attention. On Nov 11, the Ministry of Education, along with eight other central sectors, published a guideline on dealing with school violence.

The guideline stressed that students with serious behavioral problems should be handed over to special schools. Or, in more serious cases, they may take criminal responsibility and be sent to prison.

“The common tolerant attitude toward violence should be changed,” wrote Jiaxing Daily. “When teenagers do something wrong, we should tolerate and help them when necessary. But all of this has a limit."

【写作内容】

1）用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2）用约120个单词写作以下相关内容：

(1)校园暴力存在且越来越严重的原因（至少两点）； (2)你认为如何应对校园暴力（至少两点）；

【写作要求】

1）写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3）不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is shown in the short passage above, campus violence among teenagers has become an increasingly serious problem, but fortunately, the government has realized it and decided to take measures to deal with it.

There are several factors accounting for the situation worrying us, among which people’s tolerant attitude can’t be neglected. When campus violence happens, the absence of severe punishments usually makes matters worse, leading to those bad guys being more offensive and aggressive. In addition, when faced with such violence, teen victims are too afraid to report it to parents or the school, let alone call the police.

In a bid to wrestle with the serious problem, joint forces must be involved. Schools should impose severe punishments upon those offenders, even including removing them from school. Under extreme circumstances, sentencing them to prison is a necessity. As for the individuals of victims, they should be encouraged and guided to face the violence bravely and learn to protect themselves.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式作文，要求写出校园暴力存在且越来越严重的原因和你认为如何应对校园暴力。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，采用三段式，符合要求，内容齐全，同时使用高级句子。As is shown in the short passage above, campus violence among teenagers has become an increasingly serious problem,as引导非限制性定语从句；When campus violence happens, the absence of severe punishments usually makes matters worse, leading to those bad guys being more offensive and aggressive.when引导时间状语从句，现在分词做自然的结果状语；when faced with such violence, teen victims are too afraid to report it to parents or the school, let alone call the police.when加过去分词做时间状语；sentencing them to prison is a necessity.动名词做主语；另外，In addition, let alone ，Under extreme circumstances, As for 等的运用为文章增色添彩。