Question

假设你叫张明，你在美国的网友Jane想了解你对上网的看法。请根据下面提供的信息，用英语给Jane发一封100词左右的电子邮件。

1.能获得更多信息，可上网学习，联系更加方便。

2.可以聊天，玩游戏，但很浪费时间，网上有有害的内容。

3.建议要学会利用网络学习，时间应该有限制。

注意：可适当增加内容，使文章连贯，开头已给出，不计入总字数

Dear Jane，

I would like to give you my opinion about being on the Internet.

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Answer 1

Yours，

Zhang Ming

Dear Jane，

I would like to give you my opinion about being on the Internet.

More and more middle school students here are starting using the Internet, through which they can get a great deal of the latest information. They can also enjoy lessons given by the best teachers of netschools at home. Besides, it is easy and convenient to keep in touch with friends by sending and receiving e－mails. On the other hand, some students are spending too much time chatting and playing games on the net, which will surely affect their studies. And there is something harmful to the students on the Internet. So I suggest that students should be good at using the Internet for their studies but not be online for long.

Yours，

Zhang Ming

【解析】这是一篇议论文的电子邮件写作，主要围绕网络的益处和害处并且表达自己的观点。考生写作时要注意语句的精练，不要重复观点。文章第二句More and more middle school students here are starting using the Internet, through which they can get a great deal of the latest information.，使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句，并且采用了介词前置的方式；第四句some students are spending too much time chatting and playing games on the net, which will surely affect their studies又使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句，文章最后一句I suggest that students should be good at using使用了suggest宾语从句句式，文章给中从句信手拈来，且不累赘恰到好处。在短语运用上，运用了许多好短语，如：would like想要，More and more越来越，a great deal of许多，there is something harmful to有一些害处，On the other hand,另一方面….在词语的运用上，也注意灵活性，如倒数第三段，affect their studies影响他们的学业，大部分人会使用influence，用affect更为简练，有亮点。总结：本篇写作是要注意简练地概括网络的好处和害处，两者描述要均衡，不能出现一头偏的现象。

考点：考查议论文写作