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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Chess is a game for people of all ages. It develops our memory and logical thinking, encourage us to be inventive. It also teaches us to look all ways before crossing the street.

When I was a little boy, there are some old men in my village, that often got together playing chess. Although I was only eight, I liked watching them to play. From then on, I became interested in it.

Time goes on but I have become chess fan. I often play chess with my classmate and neighbours in hours on Sunday. When I win a game with a very close score, I will jump with joy wild. Playing chess can make me clever, brave and careful.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文通过作者的亲身经历讲述了国际象棋的魅力所在。国际象棋是所有年龄段的人的游戏。它发展我们的记忆和逻辑思维。

1.考查现在分词。句意：它发展我们的记忆和逻辑思维，鼓励我们创新。此处是现在分词做伴随状态，故把encourage改成encouraging。

2.考查不定代词。根据上文的our memory and logical thinking可知此处是指“两种事物”，故把all改成both。

3.考查时态。句意：当我还是个小男孩的时候，村里有一些老人，他们经常一起下国际象棋。根据从句可知主句用一般过去时态，故把are改成were。

4.考查定语从句。句意：当我还是个小男孩的时候，村里有一些老人，他们经常一起下国际象棋。此处men是先行词，指人，后面的非限制性定语从句缺少主语，故答案为who。

5.考查动词不定式。固定结构：make sb. do sth.使某人做某事。此处是不带to的动词不定式做宾语补足语，故把play前的to去掉。