Question

每年过圣诞节，总有部分年轻人欣喜若狂，他们还举行各种活动来过圣诞节。对此有人认为他们崇洋媚外，有人认为这是开放和外向的表现。请围绕中国人是否应该过圣诞节这一话题写一篇英语短文。内容应该包括：
简单叙述现象
是否赞成中国人过圣诞节等外国节日，以及你的理由
你的建议
注意：
词数不少于80。
可适当增减细节，使行文连贯。

Answer 1

As the development of global communication, western customs are imported into China. Western festivals, especially Christmas, are now welcomed by/gain popularities quickly among Chinese, especially the new generation. Should we Chinese celebrate these festivals?
I would like to say we Chinese should not be too eager and excited to observe Christmas, because we should value our own culture and tradition first. Although celebrating western festivals shows China's opening up to the world, over appreciating other cultures will have a bad effect on keeping our own.
So my suggestion is that we regard Christmas as an opportunity to shop and to enjoy ourselves, but at the same time realize that our traditional festivals are more precious.

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