题目内容
星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
题型分析
江西卷的书面表达属于应用文写作，要求学生就一次登山活动写一篇新闻报道，是学生比较熟悉的题材。报道类文章要条理清楚，语言简炼、突出重点。文章开头的第一段或第一句话要扼要地揭示出活动内容。文章的主体部分要用充足的事实来展现活动的过程，最后对活动发表自己的评论。
审题要素
写作时应注意下面几点：
（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称。
（2）注意时态的正确使用：以过去时为主。
（3）注意发挥想象力，详实叙述活动中发生的事情。。
思路导引
首先，交代活动的目的、参与者和时间、地点。（take exercise; take part in）
其次，叙述登山活动的过程。（gather; set out/off; enjoy; scenery; help each other; climb; reach; cheer）
最后，对活动进行评价。（benefit; get close to; relax; promote/ build up）
标准范文
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. Al the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time !
赏析：
| 重点短语 | take outdoor exercise户外锻炼；take part in 参加；参与；set out for出发前往；fall behind 落后；get close to 靠近；接近； |
| 高级句型 | In order to..., our school organized... 为了...，我们学校组织了....（目的状语） Not only did it..., it also promoted....它不仅...而且...（倒装句） |
