Question

【题目】请根据下面内容提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，用英文写一篇短文。

注意：①短文须包括所有内容提示，可适当发挥；

②词数：100左右

1. 饮食；2. 睡眠；3. 体育锻炼。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays， more and more people's life is becoming better and better， and as we know， it is very important for us to keep healthy． （高分句型一）Here is some advice on how to keep healthy．【展示问题】Firstly， we should have a balanced diet． This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables． Besides， we should eat less junk food， like hamburgers． It's bad for our health． Secondly， we must try to sleep early at night and get up early in the morning． This point is especially important for the students． Thirdly， we must exercise every day， which makes us stronger and helps us relax．（高分句型二）【提出建议】To sum up， health is wealth． Keeping healthy is very important for us． I hope everybody can live a healthy life．【表达愿望】

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文所给内容比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些所给的点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，是提出建议，给出自己的观点的，注意说话的语气及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

本例文层次紧凑，开始有总说，最后一段总结，中间四部分分别说明了题中给出的要点。用first,second,third,at last层次鲜明，逻辑性很强。因为文章是提出建议，所以范文中用了许多委婉的表达，如should ,You’d better等。文中使用高级词汇和句子。as we know， it is very important for us to keep healthy．此处是as引导的让步状语从句；Keeping healthy is very important for us．动名词做主语；另外，Besides，To sum up，等的运用为文章增色添彩。