Question

林书豪（Jeremy Shu-How Lin）是一位美国NBA职业篮球运动员。请按照下面的提示信息和要求用英语写一篇介绍他的短文。
1. 美籍华人（American-born Chinese），生日：1988年8月23日， 喜爱打篮球。
2. 毕业于哈佛大学，是NBA史上首位美籍华裔球员。
3. 2011年为尼克斯队（the New York Knicks）效力一年后加入休斯敦火箭队（the Houston Rockets）。林书豪打破多项NBA纪录。
4. 他每天不断的锻炼他的篮球技能，因为他相信只要不断练习就能取得成功。
5. 他是最棒的是我们的骄傲。
要求:  (1) 字数：120左右， (2) 可适当增加信息使文章保持连贯。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Jeremy Shu-How Lin is an American professional basketball player for the Huston Rocket of the NBA.
Born on August 23^rd, 1988,he likes playing basketball from an early age. Lin is the first Chinese American player in the history of the NBA and also the first one who graduated from Harvard University. After graduation, he played for the New York Knicks for one year and then he joined the Huston Rocket where he became famous all over the world. During this period, he broke many NBA records.
Lin insists on practicing playing basketball and exercising every day. Because he believes that only by working hard can he succeed. In a word, Jeremy Shu-How Lin is awesome and we are proud of him.

解析试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求根据所给汉语介绍林书豪，所以要注意用一般现在时和过去时。人称用第三人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译，还应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如insists on，are proud of ，还运用了过去分词做状语、倒装句等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和衔接如： In a word 等。
考点：提纲作文。