题目内容
假定你是李华,你原定于11月9日(星期天)上午9点到你的朋友Jack家里去帮他补习汉语。但由于你多年未见的姑姑突然来访,你没有赴约。请你写一封信表示歉意,并约定下一个星期天9点让Jack到你家。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
I am very sorry that I didn’t go to your house to help you with your Chinese. It was on Sunday that my
aunt visited my family all of a sudden.We hadn’t seen each other for more than ten years and we had so hot a talk that I forgot our 9 o’clock appointment.
So, in order to express my apologies, I’d like you to come to my house at 9:00 this coming Sunday. Will you please tell me if it is convenient to you? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求写一封道歉信,就未能赴约致歉,并约定下个周日9:00让Jack来你家补习汉语。词数在100词左右,可以适当增加细节,注意行文的连贯性;注意书信的格式,不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观。
亮点说明:范文表达简洁、清晰,很好地表达了歉意,并约定下次的补习时间;
范文使用了强调句It was on Sunday that my aunt visited my family;结果状语从句so hot a talk that I forgot our 9 o’clock appointment;宾语从句if it is convenient to you;固定句型I’m looking forward to your reply等语法知识,时表达更生动;
范文使用了一些固定短语:help ... with;all of a sudden;more than;in order to等,使作文的内容更加充实。
考点:书信类作文