Question

16．假如你是李华，你班的留学生Charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回．你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀，作为生日礼物送给爸爸．请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件：
1．品牌：Gillette：
2．价格：30美元左右．
参考词汇：剃须刀shaver
注意：
 1．词数100左右：
    2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
    3．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．

Dear Charles，
I haven't seen you for over three weeks．How have you been doing these days？I miss you so much!But it won't be long before we meet again，isn't it？
Charles，could you do me a favor，please？My father's birthday is coming，and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift．Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars．It is a very famous brand around the world．You can bring it back when you come back，and I will pay you back for that．Thank you very much．
Looking forward to your coming soon． 
    Yours，
    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一封电子邮件，委托即将结束三周的假期从美国返回的留学生Charles代购一个剃须刀，作为生日礼物送给爸爸．写作要点：1．品牌：Gillette：2．价格：30美元左右．
属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：miss sb（想念某人…），do sb a favor（帮某人一个忙…），buy sb sth （买给某人某物），around the world （全世界），bring sth back （带回某物），pay sb for sth…（因…付钱给某人）．

解答 Dear Charles，
 I haven't seen you for over three weeks．How have you been doing these days？I miss you so much!But it won't be long before we meet again，isn't it？【高分句型】
 Charles，could you do me a favor，please？My father's birthday is coming，and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift．Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars．（品牌及价格）It is a very famous brand around the world．You can bring it back when you come back，and I will pay you back for that．Thank you very much．
 Looking forward to your coming soon．
 Yours，
 Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．