Question

【题目】假定你是一名高中毕业生王志，你校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；

2.学会做人：真诚，友善；

3.学会……

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总词数。

Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

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Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

Thanks for your listening!

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇发言稿，是提纲式作文。要求根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会……。。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇发言稿，格式正确，要点齐全，结构严谨，布局合理，同时句中使用高级句子。Developing a good habit is also of importance.动名词短语做主语；It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.it是形式主语，that从句是真正的主语，句中并使用what引导的宾语从句；It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.强调句型的运用堪称经典；另外，First, Personally, In addition, Finally, No pains no gains.的运用为文章增色添彩。