Question

6．当今，绿色生活方式已被人们广泛接受，并体现在生活的各个方面．某英语报社现正在中学生中开展以"Green life at home"为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇文章投稿．内容要点如下：
1．介绍你在家的具体做法（如节能节水、环保购物等）
2．向全社会提出绿色生活倡议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文章开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
Green life style is becoming increasingly popular nowadays as it can help to
reduce pollution and save energy．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇命题作文，要求就"家庭绿色生活方式"进行征文写作．第一部分介绍什么是绿色生活方式，以其重要性引出下文；第二部分介绍你的家庭的具体做法，比如生活中要节约用水用电，环保购物；第三部分要向全社会提出绿色生活倡议．
【相关语法点提示】help to do sth．帮助做某事；water flowers 浇花；so that 因此；为了；proud of 对…感到自豪；as long as 只要；stick to 遵守；保留；紧跟；day by day 渐渐地；reduce pollution 减少污染； would like to do sth．想要做某事； try to do sth．努力做某事；  it is necessary to do sth；有必要做某事

解答 Green life is becoming increasingly popular nowadays as it can help to reduce pollution and save energy．It is easy to adopt in our daily life and here I'd like to share my practice at ho me．
     To save water，I often try to reuse it for watering flowers after washing hands or vegetables and seldom do I leave the tap water running when showering or washing．（高分句型一）Also，when it is necessary to use the air conditioner，I usually set it to a proper temperature so that I can use less electricity and save money as well．（高分句型二）Besides，I always keep in mind that I have all the lights switched off before leaving a room．What makes me most proud is that I have a cloth shopping bag made by myself for my regular shopping．（高分句型三）
     I'm fully convinced that as long as everyone sticks to the three R principles----Reduce，Reuse and Recycle，we will  e moving a step closer to a green life day by day．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．