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【题目】手机本来是方便联系的，但是很多年轻人却将手机当成消磨时间的娱乐工具。他们整天低头发微信、玩游戏，被人们戏称为“低头族”。请为学校专刊写一篇投稿，对这种情况进行分析，并发表你的看法，文章中需包括下面的要点：
1）人们对手机产生依赖，疏远家人和亲友；
2）低头玩手机甚至引发交通事故，给家人带来痛苦。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3）参考词汇：低头族Smartphone Addicts

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing，twittering or chatting using their smartphones．It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey．

They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads．This is very harmful．On the one hand，they keep away from their friends or family．On the other hand，being busy with their smartphones can cause accidents，which brings them more pains than pleasure．

As a matter of fact，they can take up reading to kill the time during their trips．Reading books or newspapers can also enrich their knowledge．The pleasure from reading is a pleasant experience they can't have from using smartphones．

【解析】本篇书面表达属于讨论类文章，根据提示信息来说明自己的观点。写作时注意以下几点：1、注意审题，仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、要依据提示的观点，按照一定逻辑关系来写，不要漏掉要点。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。