题目内容
【题目】当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文,词数100 左右:
1、看电影: 省时、有趣、易懂
2、读原著: 细节更多、语言优美
3、我的看法及理由
参考词汇: original work (原著)
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【答案】Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【解析】本次作文要求你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题写一篇英语短文。这类文章要从三方面写,一是选择看电影的人的观点和理由;二是选择看书人的观点和理由,最后是表达个人的看法。成文时要注意:1.时态:一般现在时为主;2.文章的内容要点要齐全;3.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;4.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。5.注意文章的字数控制,100单词左右。
【亮点说明】本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了besides,meanwhile,what’s more和in a word等过渡词语,使得文章衔接流畅自然;现在分词短语reading quietly in a situation of my own作状语等。