Question

【题目】假设你是张勇，几天前你的同学从附近一超市购买食品请同学品尝。吃后大家身体不适肚子疼。请你根据以下提示，给某报社编辑用英语写一封信，反映食品安全问题，希望引起社会的关注。

内容提示：1.简要阐述事发经过；

2.事发后送医院治疗；

3.你对此事的看法及建议。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about the problem with food safety. There was an accident in our school.

A few days ago, one of my classmates bought some food from a supermarket nearby. Some of my roommates were invited to enjoy it. Unfortunately, later all of them felt sick and had a stomachache. All of them were quickly sent to the hospital, where they were well treated and took some medicine. Before long, they recovered.

This accident shows us how serious the food safety problem is now. I strongly hope the whole society can pay much more attention to it. The government should take effective measures to deal with such problem, including passing more stricter laws and carrying them strictly. Only in these ways can we have a better and healthier life!

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Yong

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。假设你是张勇，几天前你的同学从附近一超市购买食品请同学品尝。吃后大家身体不适肚子疼。请你根据以下提示，给某报社编辑用英语写一封信，反映食品安全问题，希望引起社会的关注。内容提示：简要阐述事发经过；事发后送医院治疗；你对此事的看法及建议。

【亮点说明】

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