题目内容
【题目】假定你是学校英语社团负责人李华,你们社团打算排练英语短剧参加学校下个月举办的艺术节活动。请用英语给你校外教Mr. Johnson写封电子邮件,请他给予指导。内容包括:
1.写邮件目的;
2.求助的内容;
3.约定时间和地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible Version I
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I'm Li Hua, head of our school's English club. I'm writing to ask you for a favor.
As you know, our art festival will be held next month. In order to show our achievements in English learning, we've decided to put on a short English play by Shakespeare. Although we've practiced it several times, we are still not sure about our performance. We'll practice in Room 401 of the teaching building at 4 p.m. this Friday. Would you please come if it's convenient for you? Thank you!
Looking forward to your early reply .
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I'm Li Hua, head of English Club in our school. I'm writing to ask you for help.
Our club plans to perform a short English play for the art festival to be held in our school next month. We've been practicing these days but don't know how to present it better. Knowing that you have much experience in English plays, we hope you can give us some advice and guidance on it. We're going to practice at the school hall from 5 to 7 this Thursday afternoon. Is it convenient for you? We would appreciate it very much if you're available and give us some suggestions. Thanks a lot!
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份写一封求助信给外教Mr. Johnson关于你们社团打算排练英语短剧参加学校下个月举办的艺术节活动。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
1.写邮件目的;
2.求助的内容;
3.约定时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
put on;an expert in;firmly believe
第三步:连词成句
1.we've decided to put on a short English play by Shakespeare
2.Since you're an expert in English literature, I firmly believe your advice and instructions will help us to get improved a lot.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:写信目的;求助内容;约定时间和地点。
2. 表示并列补充关系:As you know;In order to ;Although;Since
第五步:润色修改