Question

14．假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
Yesterday I attended a classmate party．I was very happy to see my old friends，that I hadn't met for years．So I drank a lot．After the party，I drive home though my classmate had tried to persuade me not to．I always believed that as a skilled driver，drinking a little did no harm to driving．On the way to home，the wine began to take effect．All of sudden，I cracked my car against a sign on the road． Luckily，a policeman came towards me．He fined me and said："Drunk driving is a terribly thing．You can end up hurt yourself，and other innocent people life．"Till then，I realized that the effects of drunk driving could be deadly for all those involved．Many people who drink and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action unless it is too late．So I appeal to everybody never to
drink and drive!Cherish your life!

Answer 1

分析 昨天我去参加同学聚会，看到多年不见的朋友很开心，所以多喝了几杯．聚会结束后，尽管同学们都劝我不要开车，但我还是开车回家，我对自己的车技有信心．路上，酒开始发作．突然，我撞到了路边的指示牌，更糟糕的是，警察朝我走来．付款并且告诫我，酒驾是很可怕的，害人害己．直到那时我才意识到酒驾要人命啊．

解答 Yesterday I attended a classmate party．I was very happy to see my old friends，that I hadn't met for years．
                                                                                                                       who/whom
So I drank a lot．After the party，I drive home though my classmate had tried to persuade me not to．
                                                     drove                         classmates
I always believed that as a skilled driver，drinking a little did no harm to driving．On the way to home，
                                                                                                                                         去掉
the wine began to take effect．All of∧sudden，I cracked my car against a sign on the road．
                                                    加a
Luckily，a policeman came towards me．He fined me and said："Drunk driving is a terribly thing．
Unluckily                                                                                                           terrible
You can end up hurt yourself，and other innocent people life．"Till then，I realized that the effects of 
                       hurting                                        people's
drunk driving could be deadly for all those involved．Many people who drink

and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action unless it is too late．
                                                                                                until
So I appeal to everybody never todrink and drive!Cherish your life!
1．that改为who/whom．非限制性定语从句不能用that来连接，先行词是人，要用who，句中是作宾语，也可以用whom．
2．drive改为drove．文章讲述的是过去事情，要用一般过去时态．
3．classmate改为classmates．句意表达是很多同学，要用复数．
4．to去掉．home是副词，不能加介词．
5．加a．短语搭配，all of a sudden突然．
6．Luckily改为Unluckily．句意表达是否定，不幸的，不走运的．
7．terribly改为terrible．句中修饰的是名词thing，要用形容词．
8．hurt改为hurting．短语搭配，end up doing sth最终，以某事告终．
9．people改为people's．句意表达的是所有关系，innocent people's life无辜人的生命．
10．unless改为until．句型搭配，not…until…直到…才…

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．