Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike了解到中医在中国抗击疫情中起了重要作用，对此很感兴趣，请给他回信简要介绍中医。内容包括：

1、历史悠久；

2、中医优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：疫情：epidemic 中医；traditional Chinese medicine 副作用：side effect

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to learn that you are extremely interested in traditional Chinese medicine.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I’m very glad to learn that you are extremely interested in traditional Chinese medicine, because it plays a significant role in fighting against the epidemic in China.

For one thing, the TCM has a long history. As an important part of Chinese culture, it has been attracting much attention from all over the world. For another thing, the TCM, with its unique diagnostic methods and remarkable effects, has been used to treat cancer and other serious diseases. Unlike the Western medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects. Above all, compared with the high fees of the Western medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.

In a word, the TCM has made great contributions to the development of Chinese health care.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Mike写信向他介绍中医。

第一步：审题。

体裁：信件应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。

要点：1 中医在中国抗击疫情中起了重要作用

2 中医历史悠久

3 中医的优势：疗效好、副作用少、价格低

结构布局： 总分总

第一段，中医在中国抗击疫情中起了重要作用，写信向你介绍中医。

第二段，1 中医历史悠久

2 中医优势：疗效好，副作用少，价格低

第三段，中医在中国健康方面发挥着重要的作用。

第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）

如：As what you have known, play a key role in, fight against, epidemic, make an introduction, accumulate, impressive, remarkable, side effect, in comparison with, affordable等

第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）

如：As what you have known, Traditional Chinese Medicine plays a key role in fighting against the epidemic in China.等

第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);

3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。

第五步：润色修改。