题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi),他写信向你求助,请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信:
1.介绍学太极好处; 2.负责联系学习地点和老师;
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Forbes,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Forbes,
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.
Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信件;你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi),他写信向你求助,你要给他写一封回信:介绍学太极好处并告诉他你将负责联系学习地点和老师;时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:Tai Chi(太极),be willing to learn(愿意学),ancient martial art(古代武术艺术),mental relaxation and physical fitness(精神放松和身体健康)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如主语从句It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon.;定语从句Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.非谓语动词的运用Concerning your learning location and instructor…全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
【题目】选择正确的句子序号,补全文章。
Building Trust in a Relationship Again
Trust is a learned behavior that we gain from past experiences.(1)Trust is a risk.But you can't be successful when there's a lack of trust in a relationship that results from an action where the wrongdoer takes no responsibility to fix the mistake.21·cn·jy·com
Unfortunately,we've all been victims of betrayal.Whether we've been stolen from,lied to,misled,or cheated on,there are different levels of losing trust.Sometimes people simply can't trust anymore. (2)It's understandable,but if you're willing to build trust in a relationship again,we have some steps you can take to get you there.
●(3)Having confidence in yourself will help you make better choices because you can see what the best outcome would be for your well-being.
●(4)If you've been betrayed,you are the victim of your circumstance.But there's a difference between being a victim and living with a “victim mentality”.At some point in all of our lives,we'll have our trust tested or violated.
●You didn't lose “everything”.Once trust is lost,what is left?Instead of looking at the situation from this hopeless angle,look at everything you still have and be thankful for all of the good in your life.(5) Instead,it's a healthy way to work through the experience to allow room for positive growth and forgiveness.
A.Learn to really trust yourself. |