Question

假如你叫李钢，今年考上了大学，但家境贫寒，交不起学费。一位姓刘的教授得知此事之后伸出了援助之手。现在给他写一封信，内容包括：

1. 教授如何帮助的你；

2. 你的未来打算；（至少两点）

3. 如何感谢。

注意：内容可适当发挥，词数100左右。

Dear Mr. Liu,

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Gang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Liu,

I am glad to have received your letter and 6,000 yuan.  My family and I are very happy. Thank you very much for your kindness and your money.

With your help, I will have no difficulty in studying at university. As a result, I have made up my mind to study hard. I’m sure I will make great progress. I’m going back to my hometown after I graduate from university ,and devote myself to building my hometown.

My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this winter holiday. In the end, let me say “Thank you” once again for your kind help.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Gang

【解析】

试题分析：本文考查半开放性作文的写作。文章的要点给的很少，需要考生自己去组织语言，去组织要点。教授对你的帮助可以从学习上经济上来考虑。你的未来打算可以从努力学习，锻炼能力等方面着手。用优秀的学习成绩来感谢教授的帮助。在具体写作的时候要使用合适的连接词，高级词汇和高级句型来提升文章的层次。

考点：考查半开放性短文写作

点评：半开放性短文对考生的要求很高，要求自行筛选要点。用心谋篇布局，在个人观点方面做适当的发挥，可以使用合适的谚语来提升文章的层次。