假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在该词下面写出该加的词.修改:在错的词下划一横线.在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

【小题1】while改成 when
【小题2】greatly改成great
【小题3】has改成 had
【小题4】 walk改成 walking
【小题5】but改成 and
【小题6】As后面加∧a
【小题8】his改成their
【小题9】去掉not
【小题10】to改成with

解析试题分析：
【小题1】while表示一段时间，when表示时间点，fell down是时间点，用when
【小题2】greatly 是副词，修饰pain应该是形容词great
【小题3】as if后面的从句用过去完成时表示和过去情况的虚拟：has改成 had
【小题4】had difficulty （in） doing干…很困难， walk改成 walking
【小题5】两个动作是并列关系，不是转折：but改成 and
【小题6】词组as a result因此，As后面加∧a
【小题8】指代others应该是their
【小题9】考查上下文句意理解：我们可以帮助别人做为回报。去掉not
【小题10】考查词组：get along with和…相处，to改成with
考点：考查短文改错
点评：答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。

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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

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修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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