Question

假如你是高中生李华，请根据以下要点，以日记的形式，叙述你在11月15日（周六）参加在乡下橘子采摘节（Orange-picking Festival）的活动情况。
你到达橘园的方式，时间，及当时的天气状况；
你在橘子采摘节的所见所闻。
注意：日记格式已给出；词数120左右；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
Saturday, Nov.15                                               Sunny
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Answer 1

Today, a sunny day, Li Hua and I went to the countryside by bus to attend the Orange-picking Festival, which started at 8 o’clock in the morning.
When the organizer announced the rules of the festival, we were led into the orange garden by beautiful girls in red, group by group. While walking along the country road, we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the birds singing. The air was much fresher and cleaner than that in the city we are living in. During the festival, we enjoyed sweet oranges, watched some exciting performances and learned many stories about the town and its kind people. At about five in the afternoon, we had to say goodbye to the garden and went back home. Both Li Hua and I enjoyed ourselves and hoped to visit the again soon.
What an unforgettable day!

解析试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假如你是高中生李华，请根据以下要点，以日记的形式，叙述你在11月15日（周六）参加在乡下橘子采摘节（Orange-picking Festival）的活动情况。你到达橘园的方式，时间，及当时的天气状况；你在橘子采摘节的所见所闻。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】Today, a sunny day, Li Hua and I went to the countryside by bus to attend the Orange-picking Festival, which started at 8 o’clock in the morning.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。When the organizer announced the rules of the festival, we were led into the orange garden by beautiful girls in red, group by group.这里含有一个时间状语从句。While walking along the country road, we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the birds singing.这是现在分词作时间状语。
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