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11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：l．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Life is a long journey，during that you are to experience ups and downs．Only by hold a proper attitude will you be able to control the unexpected in lif'e．What happens years ago is still fresh in my mind．When Dad was out of work，my family was reduced to poor．The tough situation left me in low spirit．However，Mom stayed calm，working hardly in the field as usual．Whenever I complained on our difficulty，she always comforted me，"Don't lose your heart．Everything will be OK！"Then came the news Dad found another well-paid job．The experience taught me what important it is to be optimistic when in trouble．

分析 本文主要讲述当我们陷入困境时，不要失去信心，要乐观对待，生活总会好起来的．

解答 Life is a long journey，during that you are to experience ups and downs．Only by hold a proper attitude will you be able to control the unexpected in lif'e．What happens years ago is still fresh in my mind．When Dad was out of work，my family was reduced to poor．The tough situation left me in low spirit．However，Mom stayed calm，working hardly in the field as usual．Whenever I complained on our difficulty，she always comforted me，"Don't lose your heart．Everything will be OK！"Then came the news∧Dad found another well-paid job．The experience taught me what important it is to be optimistic when in trouble．
详解：
1．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词journey指物，因是非限制性定语从句，在介词后用关系代词which，不用that．
2．hold改为holding 考查动名词．介词by后接动词时，要用动名词形式．
3．happens改为happened 考查动词时态．句中时间状语years ago表示过去时间，要用一般过去时态．
4．poor改为poverty 考查词语用法．be reduced to意为"陷于"，to是介词，后接名词作宾语．形容词poor的名词是poverty．
5．spirit改为spirits 考查名词复数．in low spirits意为"情绪低落（不高兴）"，是固定搭配．
6．hardly改为hard 考查副词．hardly意为"几乎不"，hard意为"努力地"．此处表示"工作努力"．
7．on改为about 考查介词．complain about意为"抱怨，投诉"，是固定搭配． 
8．去掉your 考查词语用法．lose heart意为"丧失勇气"，是固定搭配．
9．加that 考查同位语从句．Dad found another well-paid job是同位语从句，其先词是news，引导词that不可省略． 
10．what改为how 考查感叹句．由how引导的感叹句结构形式是：How+adj．/adv．+主语+谓语．由what引导的感叹句结构形式是：What+（adj．）+名词+主语+谓语．本句important是形容词，要用how．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
   2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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Passage outlineSupporting details
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Technology overloadYour computer，cell phone，and iPod all compete for your attention-no wonder you're distracted!So （73）tear/keep/stayyourself away from constant television，Internet，and email inundation-just for a break．
Lack of sleepIf you're missing out on enough shut-eye，you are （74）likely   to be easy-angry，dealing with mind fog，and have difficulty solving daily tasks．
Poor job （75）satisfactionEveryone's unhappy at work from time to time．When （76）working
in a disorganized environment or on a boring project，you find it difficult for you to complete projects．
Too much stressStress takes side effects on concentration．Relaxing yourself can （77）increase your ability to focus on your mind．
Too little exerciseMounting evidence suggests that regular exercise can keep your mind sharp and increase learning and memory（78）ability．
（79）ConclusionAfter （80）understanding/knowing/learningthese helpful methods，you are wished to be more attentive on what you are doing．

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