Question

【题目】 书面表达（满分25分）

假如你是李华,上周五你班举行了"我的梦"主题班会。请你就此事写一篇报道,给校刊英文版投稿。要点如下:

1.班会准备情况;

2.班会内容。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Last Friday, our class held a theme class meeting with the title "My Dream".__________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last Friday, our class held a theme class meeting with the title "My Dream". Before the meeting, we decorated our classroom with paper flowers and colorful balloons. Meanwhile, the blackboard was thoroughly cleaned, on which a line of beautiful words were written, saying "My Dream".

Some students wish to be scientists and some desire to become artists. But as for the majority of us, the most pressing dream is to be admitted to an ideal university so that we can have a good education. However, we all know that it’s not easy to realize our dreams, which needs pains and efforts. Only by hard work can we make our dreams come true. After discussion, we played games, recited poems, sang and danced till the time was up. Finally, the class meeting ended up with cheerful music and warm applause.

What a happy and joyful day we had!

【名师点评】

这是一篇提纲类书面表达,写作时要从下面三个方面做起：

1.审题。写作中应该使用第一人称;时态应该以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。

2.审写作要点。首先介绍班会准备情况,其次重点介绍班会的内容,因为班会主题是"我的梦",所以需要发挥的

内容一定和梦想有关。

3.注意文章的连贯性。适当使用一些过渡词汇,以使文章要点突出,内容连贯。

【亮点点击】

本篇范文要点齐全,层次清晰,是一篇优秀的文章。文章中的亮点包括:

1.使用了比较多的高级表达方式,如定语从句、状语从句和宾语从句,同时使用了倒装句和感叹句,使文章语言

更出彩;

2.使用了比较多的高级词汇,如decorate...with..., be admitted to, end up with等,这些词汇的使用,显示出考生扎

实的英语表达功底;

3.使用了一些过渡词汇,如meanwhile, but, however, finally等,使文章显得很有层次和逻辑性。

【解析】略