Question

【题目】书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华，今年十月份即将去英国的布莱顿大学（Brighton University)留学。请给你在布莱顿的网友Tom写一封英文电子邮件，让他介绍一下布莱顿这座城市，告知他你的租房需求并请他帮忙租房子。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you that we’ll meet each other soon because I’ll start my study in Brighton University this October.

To make my stay there more comfortable, I wonder if you could do me a favor. First, I need to have a clear idea of the city of Brighton in advance, so would you please give me a brief introduction to it? Second, I want to live off campus while studying there. Therefore, could you please help me rent a one-bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom?

Looking forward to your early reply!

Your,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.以一般将来时为主。2.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅。3.注意语气。语气应该比较恳切，有说服力。难点是说出自己的租房需求，这一点最好有具体的例子做支撑，否则内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。