Question

【题目】（十六）

最近中国多个地区出现雾霾天气，某中学高三（1）班就此话题组织了一次班会活动，假设你是该班的通讯员，请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道给学校刊物。

时间：2014.1.5下午第三节	地点：学校会议室	主持人：班长王涛
参与者：高三（1）班师生	主题：还我蓝天白云
活动目的	认识日益严峻的空气污染问题，增强环保意识。
活动流程	1. 利用PPT展示图片及调查结果：空气污染致我国每年约25万人过早死亡，数万儿童健康受危害； 2. 小组讨论：如何应对雾霾天气； 3. 班主任点评。
活动小结	……

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。文章开头已给出，不计入总句数。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

As the atmospheric pollution worsens and the air quality declines, smoggy weather has occurred in many parts of China.

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Answer 1

【答案】As the atmospheric pollution worsen and the air quality declines, smoggy weather has occurred in many parts of China. With the theme of “Bring back a blue sky and white clouds”, a class meeting hosted by our monitor Wang Tao was held in the Meeting Hall among all the teachers and students of Class 1, Senior3 during the 2nd section class on the afternoon of Jan. 5, 2014. The activity aimed to get the students informed of the fact of the increasingly serious smoggy weather and raise our awareness of environmental protection. In the class meeting, the PPT was used to present some pictures and related survey results, which show that air pollution in China causes about 250,000 early deaths per year and tens of thousands of children’ s health may get threatened. Then, we discussed in groups about how to deal with air pollution and then, our head teacher gave some comments. It is the meeting that makes us aware of the importance of clean air and determine to help fight against air pollution.

【解析】

试题分析：根据写作要求可知考生写一篇英文报道给学校刊物介绍班会内容。班会内容包括时间、地点、参与者，活动主题、流程和小结。由于是叙述介绍班会内容，时态应选用一般过去时。考生写作时应注意单词的拼写，句子要符合语法规则，灵活运用句式增添文章文采。亮点解析：文章用五个复合句来完成班会内容，句式灵活，恰到好处。比如第一句……hosted by our monitor Wang Tao（班会由班长主持）过去分词作后置定语；第二句中介绍了活动的目的很好的结合了短语be aimed to do sth（旨在做某事） 以及get sb informed of sth(使某人了解)； raise our awareness of environmental protection.（提高环境保护意识）等等与环保相关的表达；第三句中又成功的运用了非限制性定语从句；第五句中利用强调句型再次强调了会议的重要性。这些高级而又有效的句式使用增加了文章的文采。