题目内容
【题目】短文改错 (每小题1分，共10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When Molly's father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8,hand him a bag. The father was in hurry so he didn't know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small stone. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly's junk. This evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it: I love you, Daddy. The father went to his office hurried, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell her about the junk. It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk and treasures!
【答案】
When Molly's father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8, 
him a bag. The father was in 
hurry so he didn't know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small 
. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and 
the desk clean into the dustbin 
Molly's junk. 
evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it: I love you, Daddy. The father went to his office 
, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell 
about the junk. It 
turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk 
treasures!
【解析】
第一处：由前面的was判断此处用一般过去时，故把hand改为handed。
第二处：in a hurry是固定搭配，表示＂匆忙＂，故在hurry前加a。
第三处：由前面的three可知，此处用可数名词复数，故把stone改为stones。
第四处：此处与前面的smiled, finished是一系列的动作，也应该是用一般过去时，故把sweeping改为swept。
第五处：由句子结构可知此处使用介词including，表示＂包括＂，故把include改为including。
第六处：此处表示＂那天晚上＂，故把This改为That。
第七处：修饰动词went用副词，故把hurried改为hurriedly。
第八处：此处指代主语he，故把her改为him。
第九处：It turned out that表示＂结果是、被证明是＂，故把was去掉。
第十处：此处表示语义的转折，故把and改为but。
