Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear guests,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are luck to have you here in middle of our English Week Activities. As planning, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program was to develop our interest in English learning and practically abilities in listening and speaking. The program consists in the following activity: recitation, singing, word spelling, storytelling and so on. The show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, we are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will be benefit from your presence but I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.

Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear guests,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are to have you here in middle of our English Week Activities. As , we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program to develop our interest in English learning and abilities in listening and speaking. The program consists the following : recitation, singing, word spelling, storytelling and so on. The show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.

Thank you.

【解析】

第一处：luck→lucky 考查形容词。be是系动词，接形容词构成系表结构，故luck改为lucky。

第二处：middle前加the 考查冠词。in the middle of…＂在……中间＂，是固定词组，故middle前加the。

第三处：planning→planned 考查状语从句的省略。在状语从句中，如果主从句的主语一致或者从句的主语是it，且从句含有be的形式，省略从句的主语和be动词的形式。As planned相当于As it is planned，故planning改为planned。

第四处：was→is 考查动词的时态。句意：这个节目的目的是培养我对英语学习的兴趣，并练习听说能力。根据语境可知，此处讲述现在的事情，用一般现在时，故was改为is。

第五处：practically→practical 考查形容词。修饰名词用形容词作定语，此处practical修饰名词abilities作定语，故practically改为practical。

第六处：in→of 考查介词。句意：这个项目由下面这些活动组成。consist of＂由……组成＂是固定搭配，consist in的意思是＂在于……＂。故in改为of。

第七处：activity→activities 考查名词。activity＂活动＂是可数名词，根据下文recitation, singing, word spelling, storytelling and so on可知此处讲述有许多活动，故用复数。故activity改为activities。

第八处：we→you 考查代词。根据语境可知句意为：亲爱的客人们，欢迎你们参加活动。故we改为you。

第九处：去掉benefit前的be 考查动词。句意：我希望我们学生从你的参与中受益。benefit＂受益＂是动词，与主语we是主动关系，用主动语态。故去掉benefit前的be。

第十处：but→and 考查连词。上文＂我希望我们学生从你的参与中受益＂与下文＂我真诚地希望你与我们在一起过得愉快＂是顺承关系，故but改为and。