Question

9．按要求完成大作文，词数60-80词．
健康是一个永恒的话题．班级将召开以"关注健康"为主题的班会，请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法和做法．
要点如下：1．Is it important to keep healthy？Why？2．What did you do in the past？
          3．What are you going to do to keep healthy？（至少写出三条）
温馨提示：1．书写工整、规范，语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名．
          2．文章必须包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥．

I think it's very important to keep healthy．It can help us to live a happy life．
However，I didn't care about my health in the past．I hardly ever exercised．I didn't like eating vegetables．I liked junk food and ate it every day．I used to stay up and get up late．
I want to be healthy．Firstly，I'm going to exercise every day．Secondly，I'm going to eat more vegetables and fruit．And I will go to bed early．
I think we can take some other ways to keep healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈健康的重要性和自己的将来的计划．时态主要为一般过去时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．Is it important to keep healthy？Why？保持健康是否重要？为什么？
2．What did you do in the past？过去你怎么做的？
 3．What are you going to do to keep healthy？打算将来怎么做？
常用到的重点短语：
help sb to do sth 帮助某人做某事
care about 关心
hardly ever 几乎不
stay up 熬夜
keep healthy 保持健康
【高分句型】
1．I think ①②it's very important to keep healthy．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语，keep healthy 保持健康

2．It can help us to live a happy life．
help sb to do sth 帮助某人做某事
3．I think ①we can take some other ways②to keep healthy
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②动词不定式做后置定语，修饰ways．

解答 I think it's very important to keep healthy．【高分句型】It can help us to live a happy life．【高分句型】（保持健康是否重要？为什么？）
However，I didn't care about my health in the past．I hardly ever exercised．I didn't like eating vegetables．I liked junk food and ate it every day．I used to stay up and get up late．（过去你怎么做的？）
I want to be healthy．Firstly，I'm going to exercise every day．Secondly，I'm going to eat more vegetables and fruit．And I will go to bed early．（将来怎么做）
I think we can take some other ways to keep healthy．【高分句型】

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．