题目内容
【题目】书面表达
66. 上周,Bill度过了一个繁忙的周末。请根据提供的信息描述他的活动情况。
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注意:(1)内容必须包含表格中的提示信息并补充至少两个活动;(2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;(3)词数:80左右。
【答案】Bill was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, he did his homework. On Saturday afternoon, he went to Lucy’s birthday party, he met lots of his friends and had a great time. In the evening, he went to the movies with his good friend, Lucy. The movie was very exciting!
Sunday was also a nice day. In the morning, Bill played basketball with his classmates. It was interesting. In the afternoon, he went to the library to do some reading. What’s more? Oh, he was so busy that he decided to have a good rest in the evening.
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文,结合所给材料,要把Bill繁忙的周末有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态,注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。文中使用了lots of, had a great time,with his good friend, also,do some reading,What’s more等词或固定搭配,使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时,本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰;还使用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句,为文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。