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【题目】7月10日，Suzy将迎来她13岁生日。她想邀请外教Miss Smith参加她的生日晚会。请你根据提示内容帮Suzy写一封70词左右的邀请信。 注意：1)．邀请信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2)．邀请信需包含所有要点。可适当发挥。
3)．邀请信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6 p.m. on 10 July. I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you get to my house. I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours,
Suzy

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【答案】One possible version:

Dear Miss Smith,

I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6 p.m. on 10 July. I would like to invite you to the party.

This is how you get to my house. After you get out of your flat, take a No. 6 Bus opposite your flat. Get off the bus at Spring Road. Then you will see a bank. My house is next to the bank. It will take you about half an hour.

At the party we can enjoy plenty of food and drinks. Peter will take his parrot. It can sing and speak. That's amazing! We will also play some games.

I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.

Yours,

Suzy

【解析】本题为材料作文，在写作之前要注意审题，作文的评分共包括三个方面的内容，即内容，语言，和组织结构分。本题内容陈述较为详细，所以在内容方面，审题较为简单。语言方面要注意对复杂的句型结构，例如倒装，强调等的运用。同时要使上下文衔接，浑然一体。所给范文中恰当的使用了JThis is how you get to my house. After you get out of your flat, take a No. 6 Bus opposite your flat. Get off the bus at Spring Road. Then you will see a bank. My house is next to the bank. It will take you about half an hour。这样的句子使得句子的变幻丰富多彩，从而使文章有感染力。