Question

【题目】书面表达(满分20分)

在生活中，人们常用有一些快乐需要分享，烦恼需要倾诉，这时就需要一个好的倾听者。请以Be a good listener 为题写一篇短文，内容必须包括以下要点：

1.一次倾听的经历(时间、人物、经过）

2.你对倾听的认识(至少两点)

注意：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

2.词数在80--100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。

Be a good listener

I strongly believe it is important to be a good listener.

Answer 1

【答案】

I strongly believe it is important to be a good listener.

I used to feel stressed before the exam. However, I kept it to myself, as a result, I felt worried and couldn’t pay attention to what the teacher said in class. One day, after I bravely told it to my close friend, I felt that relaxed.

Being a good listener plays an important role in communication. Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust(信任) each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.

In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一个话题作文，要求写出一次倾听的经历以及你对倾听的认识。记叙一次倾听的经历，要把事件的时间，地点，人物，事件的经过写清楚，用第一人称，用一般过去时进行写作。描写自己对倾听的认识，用一般现在时态，要体现出积极向上的思想。

写作亮点：短文开头直接表达了作者的观点：当一名好的听众很重要；第二段写自己与人分享自己烦恼前后自己的不同感受；第三段讲明了当一位好的听众的好处；最后一段小结：总而言之，很好地倾听可以让我们彼此走得更近。短文叙述清楚，层次分明。特虽是第三段中，用了一系列的排比句，读起来感到琅琅上口，有一股强大的气势，增强了文章的表达效果。