Question

【题目】书面表达

Peter是一名初三的学生。运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。 请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文。

注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Sport makes a difference

Peter is a Grade 9 student.

Answer 1

【答案】

Peter is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates， so he decided to do sport.

He joined Xuanwu Football Club and practised hard there. Because of football， his life has changed a lot. he finds himself much healthier than before. Now， he has grown into a tall strong guy. What’s more， he is very good at playing football. Last month， he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.

Peter needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.

【解析】

试题解析：

试题分析：本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用第三人称和一般现在时态、一般过去时态和现在完成时态进行叙述。注意时态、人称，要将题目要求的要点列举出来，注意固定词组搭配。

亮点说明：本文用了一些短语和句式，如：used to， decided to do， be good at， took part in， What’s more等使得文章句子的结构不再单一，增加了文章的亮点；并且还使用了同级比较句与比较状语从句。如： He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates. He finds himself much healthier than before.增加了文章的色彩。