Question

8．假如你叫李华，你和你的美国朋友Linda经常通过邮件谈论各自的学校生活．她知道你们学校每年都会组织一些外出旅行，比如去植物园、参观科技馆等．她想知道你本学期最有趣的一次旅行是什么？你去了什么地方？做了什么？有什么感受？请你根据她提出的问题回复邮件．
提示词语：visit，see，do，learn，happy

To：Linda
From：Li Hua
Subject：The most interesting school trip
Hi!Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you． 
                                                                           
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
That's the most interesting trip because I did a lot of physics experiments by myself．
句中"because I did a lot of physics experiments by myself．"为"because"引导的原因状语从句，这句话意为：那是最有趣的一次旅行，因为我自己做了很多次物理实验．
高分句型二：
I was very happy that I learnt a lot during the trip．
这句话句式为"be+形容词+that 从句"，"that I learnt a lot during the trip．"在句中做宾语成分．这句话意为：我很高兴这次在旅行中学到了很多．

解答 Hi!Linda，
    I'm glad to hear from you．At my school we have a lot of school trips every year．Last month we went to the Science Museum．That's the most interesting trip because I did a lot of physics experiments by myself．【高分句型一】（交代最有趣的一次旅行）It was amazing to do something with your hands instead of only watching or listening to others．I also visited the Natural World in the museum and it was amazing．The Science Museum is a wonderful place for young people．I was very happy that I learnt a lot during the trip．【高分句型二】（介绍这次旅行）
    Yours，
    Li Hua

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．