Question

【题目】书面表达。最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你认为的“低碳”生活方式是什么。请你用英语一篇文章，说说你的“低碳”生活。

注意：1.根据提示适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名；

3.词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。

Answer 1

【答案】

My Low Carbon Life

We can do a lot in our daily life to live a low carbon life. In my daily life, I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, I often sort the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when I go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍你的低碳生活。从图表中可以看出，主要介绍如何做到低碳生活，主要从三个方面，三个R，节约能能源，放弃坏习惯。在写作中注意句式的变化，及连词的应用。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如In my daily life,，Besides，hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal.，In addition, More importantly, which contributes to a cleaner world等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。