题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你叫Mary,计划在暑假期间参加一个英语夏令营。下面的广告比较符合你的需求,请写一封信提出申请并咨询相关情况。
Enjoy A Wonderful Time Studying English
Sunshine School
Course 1:English &Painting
Course 2: English &Swimming
Time:July 1st---July 10th
July 15th---July 24th
Good Prices
Wonderful Service
Amazing Acitivities
Enjoy A Wonderful Time Studying English
Sunshine School
Course 1:English &Painting
Course 2: English &Swimming
Time:July 1st---July 10th
July 15th---July 24th
Good Prices
Wonderful Service
Amazing Acitivities
注意:1信中应该包括你选择的课程及原因、上课时间。以及其他想要咨询的信息,可适当发挥
2.词数80左右。开头已经给出(不计入总词数),你只需要接着写。
Dear Sir/Madam,
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam
I am Mary. I’m planning to attend a Summer English Camp during the vacation.
As for my choice between the two courses, I prefer to choose Course One which will take 10 years from July 1st to July 10th. First, I believe my English well be greatly improved through this course, my friends also have interests in it. It would be better if we can study with the help of each other. Finally, I want to learn some knowledge about painting, especially Chinese painting because I am going to join the painting club next term.
By the way, would you mind telling me some more information about the service and activities mentioned in the advertisement?
I’m really looking forward to your reply.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以Mary的身份写一封申请信,内容是关于想要参加这个夏令营的。题目中列出了关于这个夏令营的一些情况和信息,写作时,应利用这些信息组织语言,充实内容,串联成文。通过审题可知,这篇短文中的主要内容应包括:首先介绍自己写信的目的;然后介绍自己选择的课程及原因,这是文章的中心部分;最后是咨询一下关于夏令营的其他事情,并希望得到回复。写作中有两个难点:首先是内容的组织,题目中并没有太多的提示,具体的写作内容需要学生们自己发挥想象里来补充,如选择某个课程的原因,这需要学生们自己考虑并表达出来。第二个难点是英语的表达,有了内容,接下来就要用正确的英语将其表达出来。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构考虑,写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句为主,如主谓宾结构或主系表结构,这样文章比较简洁,叙述比较清晰。为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句和复合句,调整文章结构。同时应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文的意思连贯、流畅。