Question

7．你校就"中学生业余生活"进行了调查．其结果显示，有很多学生是典型的"宅童"，他们喜欢"宅"在家里上网或看电视，而不去参加户外活动．请你写一篇报告，说明这项调查的结果，并谈谈你对这部分学生行为的看法以及你给他们的建议．

63.5%	待在家里
14%	运动
8%	学习
3%	与朋友聊天
11.5%	当志愿者

注意：1词数90左右．短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
2条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整．
3短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Last week，we did a survey on students'free time activities in my school．
                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think this habit is good我认为这个习惯好．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
Watching TV and surfing on the Internet a lot are not healthy for our eyes．看电视和上网太多对我们的眼睛不好．
动名词短语做主语，两个短语，故谓语动词用复数．

解答 Last week，we did a survey on students'free time activities in my school．
About 63.5% students stay at home．They like watching TV and surfing on the Internet．And 22% them will exercise on their free time．I think this habit is good．【高分句型一】Some student also will take part in outdoor activities．For example，about 11.5% them do as a volunteer．It is very meaningful for students．A few students，3% them choose hang out when they are free．（调查结果）
I think students always stay at home is not good．It will make them face overweight problem．Watching TV and surfing on the Internet a lot are not healthy for our eyes．【高分句型二】We should do exercise more and often take part in some meaningful activities．（看法建议）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．