Question

12．有些学生既不回家吃午饭也不乐意在学校饭堂吃午餐，常到校外的餐厅去吃他们所喜欢的食品，甚至常吃校门外一些小摊上售卖的食物．有些食物是不卫生、不健康的．请你就这一现象展开讨论，谈谈你的看法和建议．
要求：1.80个词以上；2．条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
3．文中不得使用真实的校名及姓名．
参考词汇：go…for lunch，canteen，stall，delicious，unhealthy，opinion．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
they prefer to go out of school to buy something they like to eat 他们宁愿走出学校去买他们喜欢吃的东西，they like to eat 是定语从句，修饰先行词   something．  
高分句型二
 In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious在我看来，如果我们的学校希望更多的学生回来在学校吃午饭，他们应该使食物更美味．这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果…．

解答 Some students don't like to go home for lunch，they dislike eating lunch at school．They prefer to go out of school to buy something they like to eat【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】．Some of them even eat the food from some stalls outside the school gates．But I'm afraid the food is not clean，it's unhealthy for students to eat outside．【要点一，学生到校外吃东西的情况】
       In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】，and  they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well．【要点二，自己的观点及建议】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．