Question

14．春节就要到了，你准备做什么呢？说说你的计划和安排．请根据提示写一篇80 字左右的短文．短文必须包括所提示的内容，可适当发挥．
提示：the Spring Festival    Where are you going？How are you going there？
Who are you going there？How long are you staying there？What are you doing there？
The Spring Festival is coming．I'm going to Beijing．I hear it is really a great place to relax．I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．My parents are going with me．We are staying there for two weeks．We are visiting some interesting places．For example，the GreatWall and the Summer Palace．Then we are eating some delicious snacks and taking some beautiful photos．I can make more friends during my trip and learn moreabout Chinese culture．I hope we are having fun．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I hear it is really a great place to relax．我听说这真是个放松的好地方．
I hear 后跟了一个宾语从句，省略了引导词that；to relax为动词不定式作后置定语，修饰great place．
高分句型二：
I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．我要坐火车去那儿，因为它既便宜又安全．
这是because引导的原因状语从句；be going to为一般将来时的运用，此处后跟there为副词，故省略to；  by train 乘火车，buy+交通工具作方式状语．

解答 The Spring Festival is coming．I'm going to Beijing．I hear it is really a great place to relax．【高分句型一】（点明度假的地点）I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．【高分句型二】（乘车的方式）My parents are going with me．（和谁一起去）We are staying there for two weeks．（在那呆多长时间）We are visiting some interesting places．For example，the Great Wall and the Summer Palace．Then we are eating some delicious snacks and taking some beautiful photos．I can make more friends during my trip and learn more about Chinese culture．（活动安排）I hope we are having fun．（表达希望）

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