Question

现今，城市交通繁重，每年都有许多交通事故发生。作为中学生，我们应当如何保持安全？你有什么好的建议吗？要求：内容贴切，句意通顺，单词拼写正确，书写工整。60个词左右。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Now the traffic is very heavy in the cities. Every year a lot of accidents happen and many people get injured or die in traffic accidents. So it is important for us to keep the traffic rules.

When we cross the street, we should take the crosswalk. If we are riding a bike, keep riding on the right side of the road. When the red light is on, please stop and wait until the green light is on. Give a hand signal if we want to turn or stop. Playing on the road is very dangerous. So don’t do that. Helping the old and children cross the road is always a kind thing. If we obey the traffic rules, it will be much safer for us.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们就“应当如何保持安全” 写一篇短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容：作为中学生，我们应当如何保持安全？你有什么好的建议吗？这些内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者首先说明城市交通现状，然后对怎样保证安全谈到自己的建议，层次清晰表达到位。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如So it is important for us to keep the traffic rules.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如Playing on the road is very dangerous. So don’t do that.等。

考点：话题类作文。