Question

假设你是李明，你美国的笔友Tony来信询问学习汉语的方法和建议及中秋节的一些情况。请你回信告诉他。内容要点如下：

1每天早晨大声朗读汉语，不认识的字查字典；

2每天用汉语记日记；

3去唐人街练习对话；

4中秋节在每年的八月十五；

5家人一起赏月吃月饼；

6谈谈你中秋节的感受。

要求：

1不要逐条翻译，内容要连贯。

2词数：60—80。

参考词汇：China Town Mid-Autumn Festival admire share

文章的开头已给出：

Dear Tony:

I’m glad to get your letter.

 

 

 

 

 

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

Dear Tony:

I’m glad to get your letter.If you want to learn Chinese, you can take Chinese class, in there, you can communicate with your classmates and teachers. You can read Chinese loudly every morning.If you have some new words ,you can look up in the dictionary. You can not only write diaries in Chinese but also pracitse speaking Chinese in China town.You can also watch Chinese TV, read the Chinese books, newspapers, magazines and so on.

Mid-autumn Festival is on August 15th,which is a traditional festival in China. On that day,all family members get together to admire the moon and eat mooncakes.Like Spring Festival,it’s another important day for family members to go home and enjoy happiness.

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要以书信的形式写学习汉语的方法和建议及中秋节的一些情况，全文用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如communicate with,not only... but also, pracitse speaking,and so on,get together等短语，状语从句If you want to learn Chinese,,If you have some new words；非限制性定语从句which is a traditional festival in China文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。