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【题目】社会不断在发展进步，成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的大讨论，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下：

平时	1.学会照顾自己, 高标准工作，谦虚，易于合作； 2.有好的阅读习惯，提高自己； 3.注意保护环境，不乱丢垃圾，步行或骑自行车上学； 4.懂餐桌礼仪，举止文明......(自由发挥1-2句)
空余时间	1.关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示技能的机会； 2.欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然的重要性。
总结	(1-2句)

要求：1.注意人称和时态。

2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。

3.不要逐字翻译，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work to high standards and we are modest and easy to work with. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Third,we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.

Moreover,in our spare time,we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public.Also,we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature.

In a word,if we follow the advice,we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act,the better we will improve.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈我觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。