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11．从小学到初中，从初一到初三我们每一个人都会或多或少发生了变化：我们的身体长高了，变得更结实．我们的性格也会不同程度的变化，也许更开朗，更活泼…..我们学到了更多的知识，明白了更多的道理…．
请以"Different Me"为题写一篇字数不少于70的英语作文．（文中不得出现真实的人名，校名）
I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．过去，我太害羞了不敢在他人面前说话．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我学习如此好以至于现在我是班上最好的．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．

解答 Different Me
I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】（性格内向，不敢在人前讲话）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（乐于分享，与同学相处很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】（各科成绩优异）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（积极参加各类活动）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．（暑假计划）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误