Question

5．"我的校园我的家"建设美好校园需要你我的共同努力．假设你是李华，请你给校长信箱写一封信，就以下几方面给学校提建议．

具体方面	建议
饭堂	食物不仅要安全，而且品种多样
图书馆	延长开放时间，增加中学生喜欢读的书
课外活动	有更多的俱乐部，多开展活动
其他方面	…（一到两条建议）

要求：
1．短文应包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3．词数80左右．（开头已给出，不计入词数）
Dear headmaster，
School is our home．As a student，I think it's my duty to make the campus a better place．Now I am writing to you to give some suggestions．
Firstly，I want to give some suggestions about our school canteen．Food safety is very important，but we also need different kinds of food．
Secondly，we hope the library opening hours could be longer and the books which we like reading would be increased so that we can do more reading in school．
Thirdly，we hope there are more clubs and activities in our school so that our school life will be more interesting and colorful．
At last，we want to plant more trees and flowers in our school，we hope our school will be as beautiful as a park．
That's all．Thanks for your reading．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we hope①there are more clubs and activities in our school ②so that our school life will be more interesting and colorful我们希望我们学校有更多的俱乐部和活动那样我们学校生活将会更有趣多彩．
①hope后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
【高分句型二】
we hope our school will be as beautiful as a park我们希望我们学校会像公园一样漂亮．
as…as与…一样…

解答 Dear headmaster，
School is our home．As a student，I think it's my duty to make the campus a better place．Now I am writing to you to give some suggestions．
Firstly，I want to give some suggestions about our school canteen．Food safety is very important，but we also need different kinds of food．（饭堂）
Secondly，we hope the library opening hours could be longer and the books which we like reading would be increased so that we can do more reading in school．（图书馆）
Thirdly，we hope there are more clubs and activities in our school so that our school life will be more interesting and colorful．【高分句型一】（课外活动）
At last，we want to plant more trees and flowers in our school，we hope our school will be as beautiful as a park．【高分句型二】（其他）
That's all．Thanks for your reading．

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．