Question

13．以"Should We Help Strangers？"为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法．

观点	原因
赞成	帮助他人是美德；
	帮助他人就是帮助自己；
反对	怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解；

要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确；
2）必须包括表格中所含的相关信息，可适当发挥；
3）词数：80左右（正文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
参考词汇：美德virtue； 误解misunderstand
Should We Help Strangers？
Recently our class have talked about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．                      ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
some are afraid that helping strangers can bring us troubles sometimes一些人害怕有时候帮助陌生人会给我们带来麻烦．
be afraid that从句：恐怕…
【高分句型二】
we should try our best to help strangers who are in need of help我们应该尽力去帮助那些需要帮助的陌生人．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰strangers．

解答 Should We Help Strangers？
Recently our class have talked about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
Some think we should try to help strangers．Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．（赞成）
However，some are afraid that helping strangers can bring us troubles sometimes【高分句型一】．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost for kindness．
We may come across some troubles and need strangers'help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help others just only because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．（反对）
In my opinion，we should try our best to help strangers who are in need of help．【高分句型二】At the same time we should also protect ourselves from getting into troubles．The world will be more beautiful as long as everyone shows a little love．（ 我的看法）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．