Question

14．根据以下Jeremy 去新西兰就读高中时填写的表格，为他写一份在班级见面会上的自我介绍．
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注意：1．文章须包括表格中的所以内容，可适量拓展；
2 开头和结束已给出，不计入总词数；
3 词数：80词左右．
Hi，everybody!
I'd like to tell you something about myself．I'm Jeremy，a 16-year-old student from China，Asia．To experience a different senior life，I come here．I like the school，for its beautiful buildings and friendly teachers and students．I still have some difficulties speaking and listening to English，so I hope you can help me out．You are the ones I'd usually like to turn to when I'm in trouble．I haven't had any friends or relatives here，but I do hope we can be good friends．I like drawing，and I hope there'll be art time for me every week．
  That's all，thanks!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To experience a different senior life，I come here．为了体验一种不同的高中生活，我来到这里．
动词不定式作目的状语．；experience 此处为动词"体验"．
高分句型二：
I still①have some difficulties speaking and listening to English，so I hope you can②help me out．
我仍然在说，听英语上有一些困难，所以我希望你能帮我．
①have some difficulties （in）doing sth"在做什么事上有困难"
②help sb out帮助某人解决难题

解答 Hi，everybody!
    I'd like to tell you something about myself．I'm Jeremy，a 16-year-old student from China，Asia．To experience a different senior life，I come here．【高分句型一】I like the school，for its beautiful buildings and friendly teachers and students．I still have some difficulties speaking and listening to English，so I hope you can help me out．【高分句型二】You are the ones I'd usually like to turn to when I'm in trouble．I haven't had any friends or relatives here，but I do hope we can be good friends．I like drawing，and I hope there'll be art time for me every week．【自我介绍及希望】
That's all，thanks!

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