Question

7．长大意味着什么？是关心、帮助铜须也？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、汇报亲朋师长？还是…请以I am not a child any longer为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表达你对长大的理解．
要求：
1.80次左右；
2．语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
稳重不得使用真实姓名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．（高分句型）
本句是一个主从复合句，know后加的宾语从句，其中not…until直达…才，引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．（高分句型）
although引导的让步状语从句，表示虽然，其中主句还是一个含有宾语从句the meal was very delicious的复合句

解答 I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years．I used to be weak and short．But now，I am strong and as tall as my father．The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others．（我的改变）
 It was a Wednesday evening．When I went back home，no one was in．So I cooked the meal．I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．【高分句型一】They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．【高分句型二】At bedtime，I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet．My mother said，"Dear，you have really grown up．"（经历的一件事）
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more．

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．