Question

【题目】课外活动可以让我们增长知识，发展智力，开阔视野。许多学校开展了课外活动。最近，某中学英文报开设了“After–class Activities”的栏目。请根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。内容包括：

1.谈谈课外活动的好处（两点）并介绍你学校开展的课外活动有哪些。

2.例举一项你参加过的课外活动，并谈谈你从中的收获和感受。

3.呼吁同学们积极参加课外活动。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实的学校名及本人姓名。

2. 语句连贯。80词左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

After–class Activities

Nowadays, after–class Activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools.

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Answer 1

【答案】After-class activities are very good for students. First, after-class activities can help students relax, because students have a lot of homework, they are under much pressure. Second, after-class activities can help students learn new skills from the activities. They are very useful to them for their work and life in the future. In our school, there are many kinds of after-class activities such as chess club, music club, art club, English club and so on.

Last year I took part in the English club. I learnt a lot from the club. I improved my oral English so much and now I can speak well. I feel very pleased with it.

I hope everybody can take an active part in after-school activities.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，介绍课外活动的好处以及呼吁同学们积极参加课外活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be under pressure, be useful to, in the future, many kinds of, such as, take part in, oral English, feel pleased with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。