Question

8．某英语学习网站向广大中学生征稿，谈谈如何度过一个有意义的假期．请你根据下面表格的内容提示，用英语写一篇暑假计划．要求：

暑假计划内容

1．做自己喜欢的运动

2．多读书

3．参与家务劳动

4．旅游

5．其它

（1）对于每项计划，请简要阐述理由；
（2）可补充一条自己的小计划；
（3）100词左右．开头以给出，不计入总词数．
My Summer Holiday Plan
My summer holidays are coming soon．Here are some plans for my holidays．First，I want to do my favourite sport，basketball，to keep healthy．In Grade Three，I was too busy to read books．Next I plan to spend more time in reading to get ready for the life of senior middle school．My parents always take good care of me，so I will help my parents with the housework at home during the holidays．I also hope to visit the World Expe 2010 Shanghai China with my parents．I think it's a good chance to know more about different oountries all over the world．
I'm looking forward to my colourful holidays．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈如何度过一个有意义的假期．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．做自己喜欢的运动
2．多读书
3．参与家务劳动
4．旅游
5．其它
常用到的重点短语：
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能
plan to do sth 计划做某事
spend+时间+in doing sth 花时间做某事
take care of 照顾
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
look forward to期待
【高分句型】
1．In Grade Three，I was too busy to read books．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能
2．Next I ①plan to spend more time in reading ②to get ready for the life of senior middle school．
①plan to do sth 计划做某事
②动词不定式做目的状语．get ready for 为…做准备
3．I think①②it's a good chance to know more about different oountries③all over the world．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．know about 了解
③all over the world全世界

解答 My Summer Holiday Plan
        My summer holidays are coming soon．Here are some plans for my holidays．First，I want to do my favourite sport，basketball，to keep healthy．（做自己喜欢的运动）In Grade Three，I was too busy to read books．【高分句型】Next I plan to spend more time in reading to get ready for the life of senior middle school【高分句型】（多读书）．My parents always take good care of me，so I will help my parents with the housework at home during the holidays．（参与家务劳动）I also hope to visit the World Expo 2010 Shanghai China with my parents．（旅游）I think it's a good chance to know more about different countries all over the world．【高分句型】（其它）
  I'm looking forward to my colourful holidays．（期待）

点评 本图表所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并需有适当发挥．要注意句式的多样性，适当的使用宾语从句，转折词however，连词and等．考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲，做到主题明确，条理清楚．可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．