Question

根据以下信息，写一篇不少于100字的文章。

主题：人人为贫困孩子献爱心

要点：1.许多孩子因为贫困而上不起学。2.没有足够的学习用品和衣物。3.都应该有上学的权利.4.尽最大努力去帮助他们。5. ……

参考词汇：1. too…..to…. 2. school things and clothes 3. have the right to do something 4. try one’s best to do something

In some parts of country, there are many poor children out of school.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

In some parts of country, there are many poor children out of school.They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don’t have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each student should have the right to go to school.but there few chances for the poor children. So we should try our best to help them. We can donate our school things and clothes and so on. We hope they will enjoy the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍贫困地区孩子的情况以及我们应如何帮助他们。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： there are......；They are......； each student should ......；We can......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意题目所给的提示要表达完整。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了贫困地区孩子的情况，接下来介绍应如何帮助他们，最后希望他们有机会上学。此处用了too ...... to；At the same time；have the right to；try our best to； enjoy the same chance of 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。