Question

1．假设你叫Zhang Ling，前些天收到笔友Dave的e-mail．信中说他不久要来中国学习中文．
他想了解如何学好中文．请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，提出一些如何学好中文的建议．
内容要求：（1）中文有用，外国人对它感兴趣，学习它；
（2）中英文不同，学习困难；
（3）学好中文的建议：多记忆、多读写、看电视、听广播、找人交流等．
（4）不仅能从书中学到，也能通过其他方法学好中文．
要求：（1）必须用上以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）要求句子连贯，语句通顺，书写规范；
（3）词数不少于80词，信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
参考词汇：：useful，foreigner，different from，difficult，learn…．by heart，listen to the radio，
not only…．but also．
Dear Dave，
I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．
（中文的有用性）Chinese is becoming more and more useful．Many foreigners are interested in it and studying it now．（与英文不同）It may be difficult for you because it's really different from English．（建议）You have to learn more Chinese words by heart．It's also important to do some reading and writing．You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening．It's a good way to catch （get ） every chance to talk in Chinese．You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you．If you have any questions，please Let me know．I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well．
Hope to see you soon．
Yours，
Zhang Ling．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇材料作文．经过审题，我们知道要以"How to learn Chinese well"为主旨的一封建议性的信件．其主要内容是阐述怎样才能学好中文，作者要给出合理的建议，这是文章的重点．其要点主要为4小点，注意在文章中这4点必须都包括，除了这4点，还可以适当做出补充．要求语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；词数80个左右．由于是给别人提出一些建议，所以时态确定为一般现在时，人称根据文章的需要可主要确定为第二人称．重点短语及句型：more and more useful，are interested in，different from，It's a good way to，not only…but also 等

解答 Dear Dave，
I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．（中文的有用性）Chinese is becoming more and more useful．Many foreigners are interested in it and studying it now．（与英文不同）It may be difficult for you because it's really different from English．（建议）You have to learn more Chinese words by heart．It's also important to do some reading and writing．You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening．It's a good way to catch （get ） every chance to talk in Chinese．You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you．If you have any questions，please Let me know．I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well．．
Hope to see you soon．
Yours，
Zhang Ling．

点评 此为材料作文．作文时要严格按照要求去组织文章，要抓住文章的重点，分层次条理清楚的表达出来．在阐述时要注意态度明确，不能模棱两可；要使用一些表示顺序的词，使层次更清晰，论述更到位．文章中要多使用一些表达建议的句子，注意多使用一些不同的表达方法，避免文章过于单调．结构上要注意首尾呼应．尽量避免一些单词，语法等的错误．